Contestant Two
Thesis – “my central concern for today centers around the
world “old.””
Example of Expert Testimony – “New York Times columnist
Bruce Handy explains…” “Professor of sociology, Gert Hough said….”
Example of Personal Correction – he was often tempted to get
rid of his religion’s traditions because they were old
Example of Pathos (What’s in it for the audience) “if we
aren’t willing to invest in long-term relationships, how can we expect them to
grow?”
Facts, Data (Example) “According to a 2010 pure research
study, 79% of people nowadays believe that there is a huge disconnect between
the old, and the young.
Quick summary of hook – he told the story of he and his
father wanting to get rid a suit because it was old, but the tailor told them that
it was still beautiful.
Contestant Three
Thesis – trophies and equality
Example of Expert Testimony – Herbert Spencer, Sociology
Hillary Levee (?)
Example of Personal Correction – talks about how trophies
reflect personal gain or accomplishment
Example of Pathos – positive reinforcement is vital
Facts, Data (Example) – Account Temps poll
Quick Summary of Hook – talking about his accomplishments
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